短文改错:deareditor篇一：高三短文改错专练
（一）
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make so much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
（二）
My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. And he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of him go to see him every day, and they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time from school because he is busy studying which he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks.
（三）
One afternoon, when I was on my way home, the weather changed suddenly. Darker clouds were gathering. I began to feel worried so I didn’t have both a raincoat or an umbrella with me. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying up home, I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei, good neighbor of mine. He offered to share her umbrella with me. We walked all the ways home. With Liu Wei’s help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help. （四）
I’m quite familiar your situation. As computers become increasingly popular, some student can’t help play online games or chatting. It was not only a problem of wasting time, but a seriously problem which does harm to their health. What you should do first is to find out what make them addicted with computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor test scores? Then having a heart-to-hearttalk with them. Secondly, you should help them build up their confidence and make them interesting in studies. Thirdly, to find something else for them to do instead of playing computer games. Your efforts will surely make a difference and help change their lives.
（五）
Dear fellow students,
There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too many fat and sugar. Eating snacks improper may lead to fatness and illness. What’s more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, that pollutes our campus.
Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students, should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is essential for us.
【答案】 一．【小题1】and→but
【小题2】anything →something
【小题3】reason→ reasons
【小题4】去掉it
【小题5】trouble→troubles/they trouble
【小题6】where→which
【小题7】place→places
【小题8】mostly→most
【小题9】Take→Taking
【小题10】do→to do/will do
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一封信，讲述了当今人们养的宠物过多的情况。
【小题1】and→but 考查连词以及对文章的理解。I’m sorry to occupy your precious time,与 I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays之间是转折关系，所以用but 。
【小题2】anything →something考查代词。Anything任何事，something一些事，陈述语气，所以
用something。
【小题3】reason→ reasons 考查名词。理由，可数名词，故用reasons。
【小题4】去掉it 考查代词。As is known to...众所周知，固定句式，故去掉it
【小题5】trouble→troubles/they trouble 考查动词。Noise不可数名词，用第三人称单数形式，也可以增加主语，用 troubles/they trouble。
【小题6】where→which 考查关系词。非限制性定语从句，用which引导，故用which。
【小题7】place→places 考查名词。地点，可数名词，用places。
【小题8】mostly→most 考查形容词。Most此处是最高级，最重要的是，mostly表示大多数，所以用most。
【小题9】Take→Taking 考查动词。与主语之间是主动关系，用Taking。
【小题10】do→to do/will do 考查时态。Expect sb to do /will do希望某人做某事，用to do/will do。
【难度】一般
【答案】
二．【小题1】breaking- broken
【小题2】ran- run 【小题3】去掉trouble前的the
【小题4】And--But
【小题5】patiently- patient
【小题6】him--his
【小题7】book- books
【小题8】which--what
【小题9】fast--faster
【小题10】hospital后面加in
【解析】
【小题1】breaking- broken 考查形容词 。过去分词作定语，意为“断了的，摔坏了的”
【小题2】ran- run考查动词的用法 。let sb./sth. do.“让某人做……”，使役动词后用动词原形，作宾语补足语
【小题3】去掉trouble前的the 考查固定搭配。get into trouble意为“陷入困难、麻烦”，为固定搭配，不加定冠词the
【小题4】And—But 考查连词。句意：但他玩的高兴。表示转折。
【小题5】patiently- patient 考查形容词 。句意：他有一个舒适的房间，耐心的护士和大量时间阅读。
【小题6】him--his考查形容词 。句意：每天有他的朋友去看他。
【小题7】book- books考查名词。lots of修饰book要用复数，表示“许多书”
【小题8】which--what考查定语从句。句意：他没有失去在学校的时间因为他忙于学习，这是他所丢失的。Which引导定语从句；
【小题9】fast--faster 考查形容词。由than连接的从句表示“比……更”，前面的形容词或副词要用比较级
【小题10】hospital后面加in考查介词 。句意：医生说他比想象的恢复地快在数周之内就能出院。in a few weeks在数周之内。
【难度】一般
短文改错:deareditor篇二：2015全国各地模拟试题之短文改错
D单元 短文改错
目录 D单元 短文改错 ........................................................................................................................... 1
D1 短文改错记叙文 ........................................................................................................................ 1
D2 短文改错应用文 ........................................................................................................................ 4
D3 短文改错议论文 ........................................................................................................................ 5
D4短文改错说明文 ......................................................................................................................... 6
D1 短文改错记叙文
【英语卷（解析）·2015届辽宁省沈阳二中高三12月月考（201412）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1；每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
第一行：while改为when：was/were doing sth when … 是固定搭配；
第二行：bicycle改为bicycles，those后应当用复数；dressing 改为dressed，dress是及物动词，与主语是被动关系，故用过去分词形式；
第三行：去掉sounded前的was，sound是不及物动词，不能用被动语态；total改为totally，用副词修饰形容词；
第四行：dropped后加a，一张20美元的钞票；bill是可数名词；he改为she，此处应当指代的是a lady；
第五行：out改为up，pick up是固定短语，捡起；but改为and，上下句是并列关系； 第六行：How改为what，固定句型：what a/an adj+可数名词单数=How adj a/an 可数名词单数。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河南省安阳一中等天一大联考高三阶段测试（三）（201412）word
版】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文
中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改1O处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Union is strength Whenever you're faced with difficulties or in a dilemma ,cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble
There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate ． refusing to work together with them．Therefore ．it was no doubt that I was left alone ． suffering from loneliness and failure． Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation． From then on ,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own． Surely cooperation made a great difference． Now I am getting well with my friend．
My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation can we go beyond ourselves As the saying go "United we stand ;divided we fall．"
【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
第三行：我是如此骄傲，以至于忽略了同学。这里用so…that…句型：too改成so ；classmate是可数名词，这里用复数：改成classmates
第四行：这里考查固定句型： there is no doubt that…毫无疑问；老师让他知道合作的重要性，这是幸运的事情：故Unfortunately改为fortunately.
第五行：向朋友求助，turn to sb for help。这里是泛指，去掉the。
第六行：这里考查的是固定词组：have difficulty in doing “做??有困难”，finish改成finishing；get along well with sb，与??相处的好，固定短语，在get后加on或along
第七行：考查时态：has后面接过去分词构成现在完成时：teach改为taught；考查词组：
attach importance to 重视，with改成to；
第八行：考查主谓一致：the saying后面接动词的第三人称单数：go改成goes；
【英语卷（解析）·2015届山西省山大附中高三12月月考（201412）】第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】文章通过作者的一次等车的经历，说明耐心是非常重要的
【答案解析】
1.waited后面加for 句意：有一次我在等车来。Wait是不及物动词，waited后面加for
2.past改成 passed 句意：30分钟过去了。Past是介词，这句话缺少谓语动词： passed
3.feet.改成 foot句意：我决定步行。On foot步行
4.when 改成than 句意：我已离开公共汽车就到了。使用no sooner?. Than?，句型
5.a 改成 the 句意：如果我选择等下一班车。特指the next bus
6.other改成another句意：我还要再等30分钟。Another+数词+名词“另外?
7.do 改成did 时间状语是Only then用一般过去式：did
8.possible 改成possibly句意：不耐烦可能浪费我们投入的所有的努力。修饰waste用副词possibly
9.去掉it这是定语从句，that在定语从句中做宾语，去掉it
10.lose改成losing be close to doing几乎做?，lose改成losing
【英语卷（解析）·2015届山东省日照一中高三上学期第三次阶段复习质量达标检测（201501）】第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】 第二行：1.时态：go→ went前后时态一致。2.代词误用：ours→our.这里要用our作定语。而ours则不能作定语。
第三行：3.删掉so,前一分句为as soon as 引导的时间状语从句，主句前再不需要连词。4. 介词误用Before→After根据题意是等了半个小时以后，而不是以前。故用After.
第四行：5.副词误用:impatiently→impient这里是形容词和前面的get形成系表结构。6.连词误用：and→but根据句意需要转折，而不是顺承。
第五行：7.主谓一致误用： were→ was there be 句型中be 和最近的名词保持一致。8.fish前加a.根据题意这里是钓了一条鱼及根据fish后的was,故在此加a.
第六行：9.名词复数误用：minute→minutes few修饰的名词要用复数形式。
10.非谓语误用：Felt→Feeling根据句意，feel 和句子主语之间是主动关系而非被动关系
D2 短文改错应用文
D3 短文改错议论文
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省衡水中学高三上学期五调考试（201412）word版】第一节：短文改错。
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I used to be a physician in the children’s department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.
Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily. I’m certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.
Sincerely yours Li Hua
【答案】【知识点】D3 短文改错议论文
【文章综述】本文讲述作者是名医生对于孩子误食大人药物造成中毒感到很痛心，与美国交流后得知有一种瓶盖可以完全避免这种情况的出现，故写信给编辑呼吁尽快实施。
【答案解析】
1. had 后面加been考查被动语态。Be poisoned by 被。。所毒害。
2. with—for考查介词。句意：时不时，我会收治那些被大人的药所误食中
短文改错:deareditor篇三：2014高考英语二轮专题突破检测 短文改错模拟
短文改错
(建议用时: 40分钟)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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(2013·吉林模拟)
Dear Dad,
You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it? Why not to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food.
Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving daughter,
Mary
2
(2013·广元模拟)
Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hit
by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. When I went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale.
3
(2013·玉溪模拟)
As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise. Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.
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(2013·天水模拟)
It’s reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
答案解析
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1. 【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so. . . that引导结果状语从句。
2. 【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。
3. 【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。
4. 【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。why not+动词原形, 表示建议。
5. 【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。at least至少。
6. 【解析】将第八句中的a去掉。球类前面不加冠词。
7. 【解析】将第十句中的Trying改为Try。此处为祈使句, 动词原形开头。
8. 【解析】将第十句中的lately改为late。late表示时间晚。
9. 【解析】将第十二句中的this改为it。it是形式主语。
10. 【解析】将第十三句中的receive改为accept。接受意见用accept。
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答案: Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit
surprised by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very
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careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got ∧the
beforeto middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come
his directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hit
It by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had the metersimmediately
an operation. When I went to see him last night, he ∧out of danger but still looked
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pale.
1. 【解析】第一句中的surprising→surprised 修饰人时, 要用-ed形容词, 意为“感到吃惊的”。
2. 【解析】第二句中的is→was 时间状语the other day说明事情发生在过去, 故用一般过去时。
3. 【解析】第三句中的after→before 根据句意“他看到绿灯亮之前没穿过马路。”可知用before。
4. 【解析】第四句中got后加to get to到达, 为固定搭配。
5. 【解析】第四句中的her→his 根据前文可知我的朋友Allen是男(转 载 于:wWW.ZHaoqT.nEt 蒲 公英文 摘:短文改错:deareditor)性。
6. 【解析】第五句中的That→It 分析句子结构可知真正的主语为后面的不定式, 故采用形式主语it。
7. 【解析】第六句中的第一个a→the 特指前面已经提到的汽车, 用定冠词the。
8. 【解析】第六句中的meter→meters meter为可数名词, a few修饰可数名词复数。
9. 【解析】第七句中的immediate→immediately 修饰动词要用副词。
10. 【解析】在第八句中的he后加was 根据并列连词but可知其前面应为完整的句子, 此处是主系表结构, 根据上下文时态和主谓一致, 故加was。
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答案:
As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore,
from take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. taking classes
Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break
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we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have ∧ real rest, instead
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of getting even ∧ 或tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.
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My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise. Sometime I
pleasingSometimes
have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.
fresh
1. 【解析】将第一句中的for改为from。from. . . till固定结构, 从??到?? 。
2. 【解析】将第二句中的take改为taking。构成v. -ing短语作主语。
3. 【解析】将第二句中的class改为classes。在两节课之间。
4. 【解析】将第三句中的or改为and。并列关系, 与前面的both构成both. . . and. . . 。