短文改错专项训练篇一:2015高考英语专题训练——短文改错
专题训练——短文改错 解题技巧
短文改错步骤:
1. 通读全文,掌握大意 . 2. 逐句推敲,审查,改正错误 . 3. 复读全文,修订答案 .
短文改错口诀:
动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语,细辨别,冠词连词常光顾。 代词格,细领悟;介词短语需关注;句子成分多分析,习惯逻辑要记住.
归纳短文改错错误类型:
一、词法的测试
1.名词:主要是查名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。 Hobby是可数名词,在这要用复数形式;playing football是一项运动,football只是一种球; sing和listen to 要用动名词形式。
作运动讲是不可数名词,do exercise作主语要用动名词形式,谓动用单数;healthy是形容词, 这里要用名词形式。
one of 后的名词应用复数形式。
2. 代词:对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容及在句中的作用,注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后是否一致,常考的代词包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词及疑问代词等。
1).He drove too fast, and the police stopped her.
前面提到的是he而后面却用her来代,故应将her改为him.2).This is the best film which I have ever seen.
先行词前有最高级修饰应用关系代词that 而不是which。
3. 冠词:英语中只有三个冠词,但用起来却很复杂,在短文改错中,错误不外乎该用冠词时没有用,不该用时却用了;该用an用了a,该用a(n)却用了the.
1) I meant to write letter and tell you all the things… letter为可数名词,故write后应加a. 2) I like playing the football. 去the 3) He is a honest boy. a改为an
4. 介词:检查介词主要是查介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配,介词惯用词组等是否正确。 1) I am writing to thank you with your kind help. thank sb. for sth.为固定搭配,故应将with 改为for. 2) …I’m the happiest in all.
此句想表达的意思是“我是所有人中最高兴的”。故应将in改为 of.3) Under the help of my father, I …under 改为 with4) He went to Beijing in next Sunday.in 改为on
5.形容词、副词:形容词、副词的误用主要指在该用形容词的地方用了副词,该用副词的地方用了形容词。改错行中出现形容词或副词时就要仔细分析该形容词或副词修饰什么,形式是否正确,是原级、比较级还是最高级。形容词、副词误用也是常考的改错项目之一。
1) I had not interest in English .interest是名词,应用形容词no来修饰,而not是副词,副词不能修饰名
2) These are the happier girls I’ve ever seen.(NMET2007)
此处有I’ve ever seen限定,应用最高级,故happier应改为 happiest. 3) You can borrow a book very easy.easy 改为easily. 4) These books are very worth reading.用well 修饰
6. 连词:短文改错中出现连词就要判断连词用的是否正确,是否符合句子意思;连接的是词还是句子,是否符合逻辑关系。此外如果是平行结构就要注意前后时态、语态、词性一致问题平行结构常借助与并列连词and , or , but , not only…but also…, …not…but…, either…or…, neither …nor…, as well as等。
1) As it has been raining these days, so we have decided to put off our sports meeting. 由于前句有As引导原因状语从句,因此后句不能再用so,故应把so 去掉。 2) The population is growing, but the earth must support too many people. 根据上下文意思判断,前后两个并列分句不存在意义上的折,
所以but应改为and或so.这是典型的并列连词误用。
7. 动词:动词错误在短文改错中所占比重最大,它所涉及的错误包括动词的时态、语态错误;易混动词的用法错误; 动词的第三人称单数错误;动词的非谓语形式,以及动词的句型搭配错误等。在改错题中,动词方面的考查比例较大。
1) 动词的时态、语态错误
a. I will write again and send you the photos we take together. take photos动作发生在过去,应用过去时.
b. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days.根据本句意义,should后应加上been,构成被动语态。 c. In school, I often playing football for my friends.playing改为 play; for 改为with 2) 易混动词使用错误
a. I persuaded him to stop smoking, but he didn’t listen.
persuade 意为“说服”,强调成功的结果,而根据下句 he didn’t listen可知,劝说并没有成功,故应改persuaded为 advised. b. You please rise your hands.
rise是不及物动词,而raise是及物动词,所以举手应用
raise your hands.这属于及物动词与不及物动词的误用。 3) 非谓语动词使用错误
a. We are looking forward to see you on the birthday party.
look forward to 中的to是介词,应加动名词,将see改为seeing.
b. I’m sorry I keep you wait for a long time .I got caught in the traffic. 在任何情况下keep均和doing连用,如keep doing sth.;
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keep sb. (sth).doing sth. ;keep …from doing… 等.
c. I’d like to your pen friend, and get to know more about your country. to后加be。因其后是名词,而不是动词原形,不能直接用to.
8. 词语固定搭配:主要考查介词与动词、名词、形容词的固定搭配;副词、动词的固定搭配;及物动词后多介词或副词以及不及物动词后少介词,英语中的一些固定句型与习惯搭配等。
1) My teacher advised me to keep my diary. keep a diary是固定搭配,意思是“写日记”. 2) In my surprise, he did very well in his previous job.To one’s surprise 是固定搭配
3) I thought that was dull to watch a game…(NMET2005) 此题考查it的功能,It + be + adj. + to do为固定结构。 4) …the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful.解析: not only… but also…为固定结构,故将and 改为but. 5) I have no difficulty learn maths. have difficulty (in) doing sth.为固定结构 6) He spends too much time play games. spend some time (in) doing sth.为固定结构 二、 句法的测试:
1主谓语在数上的一致; I hope everything are ok with you. are 改为is 2名词性从句的考查;
A man came up to him and asked that he needed. that是连词,在从句中无任何意义,而后面的宾语从句缺宾语,用what引导宾语从句作宾语从句的宾语。
3定语从句的考查;
This would save the life of many animals, some of then have almost died out.—them改为 which 4、强调句型;It is/was +被强调的部分+that/who… It was in 1949 when he joined the army. when改为that 5、句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。 三、 语篇的测试 语篇的测试包括: 1上下文中的时态是否一致; 2上下文中的代词是否一致; 3上下文中的逻辑是否一致;
4上下文中的词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。 四、四不改原则
1. 单词拼写不改 . 2. 大小写不改 .3. 词序不改 .4. 标点符号不改 . 注意问题:
短文改错时改“错”,而不是把文中的表达法改成另外的表达形式。很多考生对这个概念比较模糊。把原文中并没有错的形式改成了自己认可的另外一种形式,虽然改后的表达法也是对的,但这样做偏离了这类题型的答题要求,因而也不能得分。
临场应试技巧 : 做短文改错时只要记住“三歩”,“六原则和“四不改”就能提高得分率。
短文改错专项训练 1
Dear David,
I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can’t stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-confidence. It’s time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!
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Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
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My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
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Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back
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to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
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Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is more reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer customers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at their own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.
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Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera With me at that time, but I rushed back home to get . Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
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This morning I found red wallet on the campus. Girls usual like red, so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student. I opened it, try to find out whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 300 yuan in it. I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by. She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so. I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it. Later, a girl came to claim it on 3 o’clock this afternoon.
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Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
短文改错答题技巧
高考英语短文改错主要考查识别错误并改正错误的能力和在语篇中综合运用英语的准确性和熟练程度。高考试题一般按1:1:2:6的规律,即正确一行,缺词一行,多词二行,错词6行来设题。 (一)技巧点拨
1.注意分行的技巧性。上一行的末尾和下一行的开始,往往是考生们容易忽视的地方,不易找到错
误所在,从而影响了改错的成绩。考生要密切关注行尾和行首的接连处,注意它们之间的语法关系或逻辑关系,尽快找到设错点,从而尽快改正。
2.要以句子为单位而不是以单词为单位进行判断。改错题的要求是每行找出一处错误,但在找错时
不能以单词为单位来找,要以完整的句子为语言单位进行判断。
3.注重上下文之间的逻辑关系。在短文改错题中,有时设错的内容与短文上下评议的时态人称等有
密切的关系,如果只从一个单句来考虑,而不关注上下文的各种逻辑关系,就可能造成判断失误,增加失分的因素。
4.在逐行寻查错误时应着重注意看句子结构是否完整,看习惯用法固定搭配是否正确,看上下文逻
辑是否合理,看主谓是否一致,时态、语态是否正确,冠词、代词、连词、形容词、副词以及关系词的使用是否得当。
(二)近几年的高考试题语法设题项目分布
1. 名词和限制词的搭配。主要涉及可数与不可数名词与冠词、指示代词、物主代词的错误搭配,以及
名词的单复数的误用。
2. 动词的时态、语态以及非谓语动词。常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时中间杂有另一时态的现象,
以及动词的谓语与非谓语形式、非谓语动词之间的误用。
3. 代词的误用。主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当
用形容词性的物主代词用了名词性等。
4. 数词的误用主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,以及hundred, thousand, dozen, score等词和具体
数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。
5. 形容词与副词辨析主要涉及到形容词和副词的原级、比较级与最高级的误用,以及形容词和副词的
误用等。
6. 考查英语中的并列现象在一些英语中的并列结构中没有用并列的语法结构,如并列连词连接的两个
部分等。
7. 考查上下文的逻辑关系。如:but, and, so,however, otherwise等一些并列连词和连接副词的误用。
before, after, when, until, since等状语从句引导词的误用等。还有肯定和否定的误用等。 8. 一些相似结构的误用。如:used to do, be used to do, be used to doing等结构的误用。 9. 惯用法的搭配。如:动词短语look at /pay attention to /listen to 等固定用法。 (三)解题步骤
做短文改错题时一般遵循以下几个步骤:
1. 先通读全文。认真阅读短文,在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。注意文章中上下文的逻辑关系是否正确,时态、人称、主谓、指代等是否一致。
2. 聚焦出题热点,综合运用所学语言知识,对不同的错误情况进行分析和解答(即改词、加词或减词)。 3. 再次通读全文,校对自己的改正是否正确。一般各种改错的方式都应该用到,如果出现了某一种改法(如加词、减词等)没有用到,要考虑自己的改错应该有问题,要对刚才不是很有把握的行进行推敲。在自己认为正确的行后划勾,并且校对其他行改正的符号是否准确,大小写是否拼写正确(这点
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同学们很容易忽视)。如果某一行有两种改错方式要推敲哪一种是最佳改法。
people, not the young alone
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I hadn’t seen Mr. Chen since I left school four years ago76. _______ but I often think of him. I wasn’t very well at most 77. _______ subjects. I suppose I was a bit of lazy and now I wish I’d 78. _______ done more work, especially maths. The only thing I can79. _______
短文改错口诀:
时态语态主谓病,可不可数在动名;介连冠词设多少,区别搭配与误用; 形副级别与词性,代词三格要分明;行文逻辑应顺通,斟词酌句处处功!
短文改错专项训练
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短文改错
To my opinion.there are advantages and disadvantages 76.____________ remember is that the angles of a triangle adds up to 18080. _______ degree! But when I went into Mr. Chen’s class, I really 81. _______ became interesting in a subject for the first time. Before Mr. 82. _______ traveling both by plane atld by train.Travel by plane is time-saving,comfortably,and you can have a good reston the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel bytrain.it is not expensive and quite safety and you callappreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of therailway.However,it was too crowded and time-wasting,and we can take a good rest.So you can see everycoin has two sides.You’d better to choose either ofthem depending on your own interest or economy.
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A disabled person who wanted to go shopping in thiscity will find difficult to do so. If the person has serious visual problems, finding the store is almost possible. The signs are small and difficult to see, or all the streets are not marked to help someone who is blind. If the person is from a wheelchair, he or she will not be able to get into the stores, because the ground is higher than the sidewalk and anyone who goes in or out must cross through a narrow gate. Inside the store, passages are not wider enough for a wheelchair.3.
As the development of the Internet, more and
more people tend to send out e-cards instead of paper ones to their friends when important holiday comes.Comparing with traditional cards, e-cards are lively
and interesting. They can give us not pictures but sounds as well. However, it is faster to send an e-card. Thereis a variety of cards online you can choose from. With thepopularity of e-cards, less paper is used as making paper
cards, it is better for our environment. In short, I hopesending greetings using e-cards will be accepted by more
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Chen, science had been simply a subject full of strange 83. _______ words to me. I had no idea how a cell was and I didn’t 84. _______ want to know either! I found it all so boring but difficult. But Mr. Chen made everything interesting.
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Yesterday afternoon I went to Hongshi Park. It happens that I saw 76.__________ a touched event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake.77.__________ Among whom was a happy family. They were taking photos 78.__________ while suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was
79.__________ struggling but her parents cried out, “Help! Help!” It was
80.__________ obviously that they could not swim at all. From nearby a young man 81.__________
immediately rushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he
jumped into water and quickly swam towards the girl, who was already 82.__________ tired out. At last he carried her to the lake bank. She was saved!
83.__________ How happy the parent were! Before they thought
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thanking the young man, he had disappeared.
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In the first day when I went to work in a very famous76.___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few77.___________ people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78.___________
the restaurant. After ordering two French dishes and some food,
79.___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the
80.___________
meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81.___________ else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My 82.___________ meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes83.___________ passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84.__________
reasons why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about 85.___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.
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It is Sunday. Li Ming is busy working his lessons
76. __________ in the afternoon in home. At break, he relaxes by the 77. __________ window expect to enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy 78. __________ traffic seem to remind him of something. As a
79. __________ senior 3 student, facing with NMET, time is more or 80. __________ less limited for him. He thinks he must plan everything 81. __________ careful in order to solve the remaining problems with 82. __________ his lessons and prepared for the coming exam. Meanwhile,
83. __________ he has to take good care of him. Li Ming is determined
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to try his best so that he will achieve a success.85. __________
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Climbing is my favorite sport.I am very fond it, 76._________ especially in later autumn.One day early in the morning, 77._________ my friends and I put our sports shoes and started off.78._________ After climbing for half an hour, we got at the top of79._________ the mountain. There we have a good view miles around. 80._________ To the north, a big river crossed the city. There were many 81._________ ships sail busily. A lot of beautiful trees were there, too. 82._________ The sun started to go down, but it was time for us 83._________ to go back. In the way back, we were laughing and 84._________ talking all the time. We had a good time on that day. 85._________
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Mr. Huang is sixty year old. He has retired. He taught us 76. English when we were in Senior Grade One. He was old, and 77. he taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. Mr. 78. Huang usually made well preparations for the lessons and was 79. strict with us too. Each time we made mistakes in our homework, 80. he would ask us to correct it. At one time, I was rather poor in 81. English. Mr. Huang often helps me with my study very82. patiently. With his help, I made a great progress and caught83. up the class. He was always very kind to every student. As an 84. experiencing teacher, he was respected and loved by all the students. 85.
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The first fact I worry is noise pollution. People can't sleep 76._________ well if there is too much noise. That's why such many people77._________ prefer to live in the countryside rather than living in noisy cities.78._________ I suggest all the factories and cars not make terrible noise. Although79._________ they make terrible noise that are not allowed, they should be fined, 80._________ and we can also produce cars which don't make terrible noise. 81._________ Another pollution is rubbish pollution. If nobody makes so much 82._________ rubbish, one day we may live in a world filling with rubbish. 83._________ Some people throw waste paper about. I suggested rubbish 84._________ should be put into different kinds of dustbins or papers bags.85._________
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Last summer I was considering how I can make a contribution 76.__________ to the 2008 Olympics. Finally, I realize my wish during 77.__________ my 19-day tour of America. Stayed with my host family, 78.__________ an old couple in Tucson, US, I came up an idea. Wouldn’t79.__________ that be a good opportunity to spread the message of the 80.__________ Olympics to these two Americans? To my surprised, they 81.__________ were real interested in my idea. So I decided to give them a82.__________ speech. Apart from a brief introduction to the Beijing Olympic83.__________ Games, and I offered them other information about Chinese 84.__________ culture. I also invited them to pay visit to Beijing in 2008. 85._________
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One evening two young men were walking in the street.
They tried to find a chance to steal everything. The clock 76. __________ strikes twelve. Most people were in bed. Quickly they came 77. __________ to a house so it seemed that everyone in the house had fallen 78. __________ sleeping. Standing at the front gate, one man said in English to 79. __________ the other at a low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to 80. __________ the front door and then get into the house.” Suddenly out of the 81. __________ house ran a dog, barking at them. The two men were very afraid 82. __________ and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop until they 83. __________ had got to a lonely place. One man said to the other in surprise, 84. __________ “It’s too bad. I had thought that the dog could understand English.” 85. __________ 叙事类的2篇:
13. Dinner on Children's Day On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, 76. _________ in which children and their parents play the rich and the poor. 77. _________ In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the 78. _________ poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). Parents 79. _________ both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They 80. _________ hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner.81. _________
Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. _________ Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. _________ The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. _________ differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. _________ know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.
14.
It was fine while I got up early last Saturday morning. 76. __________
So I decided to go hiking and took some photos in the77. __________ beautiful country. After breakfast, I took my camera with 78. __________ me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip 79. __________ so much that I didn’t realize the weather had been turned 80. __________ bad. I began to run and it was too late. I was caught81. __________ in rain and was wet through. I kept on running until
82. __________
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短文改错专项训练篇二:高中英语短文改错专项训练
短文改错专项训练
下面短文中每篇各有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Passage 1
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of thestreet. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Passage 2
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
Passage 3
Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.
Customer
Li Ming
Passage 4
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
Passage 5
I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good.In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.
Passage 6
Dear Susan,
I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
Passage 7
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even
communicate some college students freely.
Passage 8
If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.
Passage 9
Dear Mary,
I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 10
Dear Ralph,
I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,
but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one
to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find
they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve
become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I
felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this
sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?
参考答案
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短文改错专项训练篇三:高一英语短文改错专项练习
高一英语短文改错专题练习(10篇)
答题要求:此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
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While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick.A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. Hetook me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office. and took me to there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this e
xperience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all.B
The Internet is playing a important part in?????? our daily life. On the net, we can learn about?????? news both home and abroad and some other?????????informations as well.We can also make phone calls,??? send messages by e-mails,go to net schools,and??????learn foreign languages by ourselves.Beside,we?????can enjoy music,watch sports matches,and play the????chess or cards.The net even help us do shopping,???? make a chat with others and make friends with them.????In a word,the Internet has made our life more easier.?? C
A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it.
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I received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, you’ll finish the middle school. What pleases us most is that you do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is ! Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished you to make better use of your time. The full preparations you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be.E
During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It isboth cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much. This experience has shown that traveling in air isactually the safest way of make journeys. F
Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was afine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachersattend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 secondsand broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we wereall trying to do my best.Althought I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours, Li Ping
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A group of scientists were planning to go
to countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country
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had polluted.On arrival,they started to check the air and water.To our surprise,they found how terribly the situation was. They could see the serious pollution. Look into the cause,they persuade the government to pass the law to protect environment and kept the balance ofnature. Now everything has changed. Birds are singing while tree and grass are waving.
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One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately.She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to thekitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. I
I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema. I met an English woman, who lost her way.I gave up the chance see the film and took her to herhotel. While go there, I told her about great changesthat had been taken place here in the past few yearsand she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practicedmy spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him.
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10 I live in a small town in the south. This is typical Chinese town. There are not only two main streetswhich across in the middle of the town. Around thetown stand a high wall, which was built long ago, and it is still possibly to walk along it. No motorcarsallowed in the business streets, which makes shoppingvery easier and safer. On warm days some small restaurants put table and chairs outside the houses tolet people to take a rest and have some tea or ice-cream. There are no tall buildings but some beautiful parks.
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Keys:
A) 71. traveled-traveling 72. well-dressing---well-dressed 73. office 后加was74. 去to75.can’t--- couldn’t 76. 去but 77. myself- my 78. to—for79. healthy--- health 80.√
B) 81. a→an 82.√ 83.home前加at 84.informations→information85.e-mails→e-mail 86.Beside→Besides 87.去掉the 88.help→helps 89.第一个make→have 90.more→much
C)81. returning 后加to 82. have→had 83. good→well 84. interested→interesting 85. √ 86.one→a 87. their→his 88. 去掉to 89. funs→fun 90. 去掉it
D)81. was前加that或去掉was 82. greatly前加are 83. 去掉how 84. After→In
85. 去掉the 86. √87. what→how 88. wished→wish 89. full→fuller 90. certain→certainly
E)1.在the first time 前加for 2. and →or 3. safe→safer 4. happily→happy 5. longer→long 6.cloud→ clouds 7.interested →interesting 8. √9. in→by10. make→ making
F)1、去掉more2、holding改held3、正确 4、attend改attending 5、finish改finished 6、去掉in7、success前加a8、my改our 9、winner改winners 10、that改what
G) 81.countryside 前加the 82.去掉that 83. polluted前加been 84. our改their 85.terribly改terrible 86.look改 looking 87.persuade 改persuaded 88.kept改 keep 89.正确90.tree改trees
H) 76.as---when 77.rings---rang 78.She---It 79.a---the 80.was full 81.opening ---opened 82.In---To 83.√ 84.about 去掉 85.which---that
I) 81、film 前的 the 改为 a82、lost 前加 had83、see 前加 to 84、go 改为 going 85、去掉 been 86、去掉 had 87、去掉 but 88、正确 89、on 改为 at 90、him 改为 her
J) 61.typical前加a 62.去掉not 63.across→cross 64.stand→stands 65.possibly→possible 66.allowed前加are 67.very→much 68.table→tables 69.去掉to 70.√
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