首先，因为大家都还小，不要太勉强他们用超长的句子和生僻的词语，重点先放在意思的完整表达和语法通顺不出错上。其次，小孩子的表达往往是最具创意的，您可以先给他们一些题目，不给任何指导，让他们自由发挥，最后由您把亮点发掘出来，再给予语法方面的指导。呵呵，希望我这个教育外行能帮到你
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这次的英语四级不算作文拿到81分，作文写满了划线，语法错误少于三个。有优秀的可能性吗？
跟我差不多，不过他们说英语作文超过规定字数要扣粉的
优秀基本无望，因为85分以上才行
85以上时优秀。
你肯定过了。但优秀与否很难说，因为最终成绩不是卷面成绩。
不过问题应该不大，想开点：）
强人，不会是真的吧
请帮忙找几篇优秀的英语作文.
??Millie
My name is Millie。I am 12 years old。 I was born in Beijing and I live in Beijing too。
I am not very tall。
??I have dark brown eyes and my hair is short and black。
I love listening to music。 I listen to CDs at the weekend。
I like reading 。
??I am in the school Reading Club。I like English and Chinese at school。I am good at English。
I have lots of friends at Beijing Sunshine Secondary School。
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I like piaying with them。 。
??I am Gee Gee。 I have 2 big attractive eyes。 I am good at jumping, swiming, and singing。 I like to wear green clothes with some spots on back。
?? I like summer but I don"t like winter。 It is too cool for me。 So I usually take holidays in winter and sleep at home。
I never go to school and then I never work in an office。
?? But I am a good assistant of farmers。 I voulunteer for helping farmers to kill insects and worms。 Farmers like me very much because they don"t need to buy pesticide with my help。
?? They can save a lot of money every year。 But I never ask the money from them for my volunteer job。
I like singing very much。
?? I sing very laudly。 With my friends, I like to sing at warm nights or after heavy rain。 Some people do not like me because they don"t enjoy my singing, instead, they think I am making noise and it sometimes breaks their dreams。
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If you need help, don"t hesitate to look for me。 I am usually jumping around in the field。